Good conventional start and ending. Music is excellent and VO anchors meaning and narrative nicely. Sound bridges are effective. Some points to consider:
- titles aren't up for long enough and are very hard to read - you need a shot of popular girl and boyfriend to anchor meaning of who is who - do we need to see the face of who says "I will figure this out"? - there seem to be lots of characters in the trailer; is this intentional?
Good conventional start and ending. Music is excellent and VO anchors meaning and narrative nicely. Sound bridges are effective.
ReplyDeleteSome points to consider:
- titles aren't up for long enough and are very hard to read
- you need a shot of popular girl and boyfriend to anchor meaning of who is who
- do we need to see the face of who says "I will figure this out"?
- there seem to be lots of characters in the trailer; is this intentional?